Saturday, 30 April 2011

Ancillary Task: First Draft and Feedback (Magazine Advert)



Feedback from our media class:

-"Colours are quite dull and dreary."
-"It doesn't attract the reader's eye. It should be brighter and warmer."
-"You need to brighten her up, but not the background."
-"You need to brighten up her hair."
-"Maybe add some contact information, ticketline or a band website."
-"You need some standard font for the band name."

-"You have the wrong sizing for the writing. It swamps her."
-"The writing is really small and it overshadows her."
-"The costume is good."

-"The picture fits well."
-"The font is ok"
-"Don't crop her hand off."
-Someone else said "Not a fan of the font."
-"Up the vibrance."
-"The tour dates in a box crop her legs off."

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